I'm on to page three now, and I am already glad of the freedom that being my own writer allows me. I changed the dialouge mid page, and just went with it from there. I even went in an entirely different visual direction with the page than I had originally planned because it made more sense that way. I don't know what it is, but i am much more comfortable working this way. Included under the cut is a snippet of page three, the words modified.